The Server Room Job
3 chapters for 1 character · about 10 minutes · told 1 time. The highlighted parts are filled in with your own characters when you make this story yours.
Chapter 1: The Plan
Night. A dark office on the eighth floor, empty takeout boxes stacked like dirty snow. One screen still glows, and it shows a log of outgoing files, thousands of customer records, and a partner name at the bottom of every line.
⟨Character 1⟩: Four thousand three hundred. That's just Tuesday. And there's the folder address, some server in a country I had to look up on a map. Ten years building that database, and he's been selling it by the box. I should call the police. The police want paperwork. I hate paperwork more.
⟨Character 1⟩: Ravi. Don't ask who this is. You still owe me two months of severance you took with you when your start-up of the month fell over. No, I'm not calling about that. I need a body with a badge that still works, a lift, and forty minutes of nerve. Are you busy at three tonight?
⟨Character 1⟩: Good. My lot, third floor down, the one with the leaking pipe. Bring gloves. And Ravi, if you're still broke enough to say yes, say yes at the car, not on this line. I've built enough phone systems to know they hear everything.
A concrete parking garage. Water drips into a stained bucket. ⟨Character 1⟩ unfolds a napkin across the passenger seat, inked with boxes and arrows.
⟨Character 1⟩: Here's the door. Steel, keypad, no window. I designed the keypad, so I know its one flaw. A cloned card from the old batch still opens it, because nobody changed the batch after I sold my shares. Here's the corridor. One guard, Delroy, sits by the west stairwell and watches horse races on his phone with the sound off. He doesn't walk the hall between two and five. Never has.
⟨Character 1⟩: We go in at three. Clear the corridor. The drives sit in rack four, the one with the red light that blinks like a slow heartbeat. We pull them, copy nothing to the cloud, copy nothing anywhere. Physical evidence in a bag beats a screen full of words. Out the loading door before the morning shift clocks in at five.
Ravi: And if it all goes wrong? Because everything I've ever backed has gone wrong. I've got this debt that gets bigger every month and a food truck I see when I close my eyes. If I get caught, three years unpaid severance won't cover the lawyer.
⟨Character 1⟩: We won't get caught, because I built the security. Every camera, every lock, every alarm was my code before it was his money. I know where it's blind, because I made it blind. You get your truck. I get my proof, and then I get one long sleep with the phone off.
Ravi: You've got a gray box of napkins but no plan for being a person. Fine. Three o'clock. But if that red light stops blinking, I'm running.
Chapter 2: The Job
Two in the morning. Rain on the loading dock. A steel door and a keypad glowing green in the dark.
⟨Character 1⟩: Card goes in, pause of one second so the reader doesn't log a ghost. Then the code. Not his code, mine. I wrote the backup sequence and nobody ever removed it. Thirty days since I left and the door still remembers me better than the people inside.
Ravi: ⟨Character 1⟩. There's a man by the desk. Big shoulders, watching a screen. That's not a distraction, that's a wall. If he looks up, I'm a criminal with a bad haircut and you're a rich man in trouble. Only one of us walks out looking normal.
⟨Character 1⟩: So give him something better to look at. You yell at me about money. Loud. Call me a thief who took your severance. He'll be on his phone filming before he thinks to check the corridor. Delroy loves a fight more than a horse.
⟨Character 1⟩: You owe me two months, you liar! Two months and you buy a car? I should call the police right now, you hear me?
Ravi: I earn that car! I break my back while you sit somewhere counting money, and you chase me into a parking lot at two in the morning like a crazy man!
The guard crosses the lobby, phone raised. The corridor behind him stands empty. Two figures slip past the glass and into the wide white hum of the server room.
⟨Character 1⟩: Rack four. Right where I left it, the red light blinking slow like a heartbeat. Pop the drives, one, two, three. Bag them. We don't need to copy a thing. Rare thing, a plan that works.
Ravi: ⟨Character 1⟩. That light just changed. It's blinking fast now, and the read heads are spun up. Something's pulling data through here. All of it is spinning up at once. That's not a backup, that's getting emptied.
⟨Character 1⟩: Remote wipe. He's doing it from home. Every drive gets wiped and then my evidence is a bag of dead metal. Grab them anyway. A wiped disk can still be carved. Take three, take five. There's the alarm, and there's the gate dropping. Move!
Chapter 3: The Last Minute
The steel gate grinds down like a slow guillotine and Ravi is on the wrong side, shouting with his bag of drives pressed to his chest.
Ravi: Go! The drives are in your hand, ⟨Character 1⟩, take them and run! If both of us stay, we both sit in a cell and your partner keeps the money. I'll tell them I made you do it. I'm broke, remember? It's a believable story.
⟨Character 1⟩: No. Not happening. I'm not leaving you in a room that's about to seal like a soup can. Hand me the drives and find something heavy.
He shoves a folding chair into the path of the gate. Metal shrieks on metal. It holds for a second, two seconds. He grabs Ravi's wrist and hauls him under the gap just as the chair folds flat, and the gate slams shut with a bang that rattles the racks.
Ravi: You jammed it with a restaurant chair. That's it? That's the master plan? My bag's in my arms, my heart's outside my ribs. Let's go, first stair, don't look back, don't look back.
Delroy: Hey! You two! Stop where you are!
Ravi: Go through the side door and turn right for the loading ramp. Do not wait for me, do you hear? Whatever happens, get those out of here. Six months from now, you'll thank me.
⟨Character 1⟩ hit the loading ramp with the driver bag and the spray of blue lights behind him, and he did not turn around. Six months later, a cheap apartment, a laptop, the hum of a fan that's seen better days.
⟨Character 1⟩: Sentencing, addressed to me. Three years in a facility two hours out of the city. I told him court three times. One unread message: his money came through the forensic recovery, but by then he was already inside. How's the truck?
Ravi: The truck is a dream with an engine block of rust. I keep a drawing of it on the wall in here. The other men think it's a van. They don't laugh, that's all they don't do. My three years are fine. The one that's not going to be fine, that's the wait to come home.
⟨Character 1⟩: Stay that way. Keep the napkin drawing. When you come home, I'll put what's left of this apartment's money into the griddle and the tires. You're going to cook. I'm going to sleep. That's it.
It's alright now. Rest easy, all of you.
A question for tonight
Did ⟨Character 1⟩ do the right thing by going back for Ravi, even though it meant losing his company?