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The Map That Lied

3 chapters for 4 characters · about 10 minutes · told 1 time. The highlighted parts are filled in with your own characters when you make this story yours.

Chapter 1: The New Road

⟨Character 1⟩ unrolls her contest map on the floor of the small flat. The paper smells of pencil shavings and the faint tang of the glue stick. ⟨Character 4⟩, the scruffy beagle, lifts his head from Rohan’s feet and thumps his tail once.

⟨Character 1⟩: Something’s wrong. I didn’t draw this road. It goes right through the old pump house, and I know I didn’t draw it. I drew the pump house as a square with a cross on top, because it’s locked and nobody goes there. But here’s a road, a big thick road, coming off the main road and ending at the pump house door. I didn’t draw that.

⟨Character 2⟩: Give it here. Let me see. Oh. That road. Right. I might have copied it from the map on the back of my notebook. A friend’s father gave me that notebook. He works for the water department. He said it was a new road they were planning, and I thought it would make your map look more real. I didn’t think you’d mind.

⟨Character 1⟩: You copied it? Rohan, this is my contest map! I’m supposed to draw the city truthfully. The judges will look at it and say, ‘This girl drew a road that doesn’t exist.’ I’ll be disqualified. Why didn’t you ask me first?

⟨Character 3⟩: What’s all this shouting? I’m trying to find my glasses. They were on the shelf next to the broken compass, and now they’re gone. And what’s that word you said? Pump house?

The steel tumbler slips from Kamala’s hand and clatters on the floor. Water spreads in a dark fan across the tiles. She stares at the map on the floor as if it might bite.

⟨Character 3⟩: No. Nothing. I just forgot why I came in here. My glasses, that’s all. The pump house, it’s not a place for children. It’s locked and dirty and there’s nothing there. Don’t go near it. Now, where did I put that tumbler?

⟨Character 2⟩: She dropped it on purpose. I saw her hand shake. Gran never shakes. And she didn’t forget why she came in. She heard ‘pump house’ and went white. Something’s going on. You want to follow that false road? I’m in. But we go now, before it gets dark.

⟨Character 1⟩: We follow it. I’m taking my map and a pencil. If the road is lying, I want to see what it’s hiding. And Rohan, you’re carrying ⟨Character 4⟩. He’s scratching at the door already. He knows something’s up. Let’s go before Gran tries to stop us.

The false road leads through a lane of parked scooters and a stinking drain, to a low brick building with a new padlock. The padlock is shiny. ⟨Character 4⟩ scratches at the door and whines. Kamala arrives out of breath, singing an old Tamil song about a river that never reaches the sea.

⟨Character 3⟩: You children, stop right there. That padlock is new. Last month it was rust. Someone’s been here. And that road on your map, Aanya, it covers an old pipe. I know because I used to work for the water department, and I drew maps like that one. A road on paper can hide a pipe underground. Now step away.

⟨Character 2⟩: Too late, Gran. I’ve got my cricket stump. One good twist and the padlock’ll pop. I’ve done it before, on the school shed. See? There she goes. Don’t tell me what to do. I’m helping Aanya find the truth, and you’re not stopping me.

⟨Character 1⟩: Rohan, wait. The map line matches this blank spot on my paper. I never drew anything here, but the false road goes straight over it. That means the road was drawn to hide the pipe. Gran, you said you drew maps like this. Did you draw this road? Why are you so scared?

The padlock clicks open. Inside, the air smells of chlorine and rust. A wall map shows a second false line. ⟨Character 4⟩ plants his paws at the top of the steps and will not go down.

Chapter 2: The Logbook

The torch beam slides along a wooden shelf. Aanya pulls down a rusted logbook, its cover soft with damp. A wall map hangs behind it, showing a drain that turns away from the river and into the storm sewers. ⟨Character 4⟩ sits by the steps and whines.

⟨Character 3⟩: K. Iyer. These are my initials. I wrote this. Twenty years ago, I was a map clerk in the water department, and this is my hand. I drew this drain away from the river because the contractor asked me to, and I kept my job. I told myself it was only ink. I told myself it didn’t matter. And then I forgot, or I made myself forget.

⟨Character 2⟩: We should go, Aanya. Right now. If that’s Gran’s handwriting, then we’re standing in the middle of something that could get us in trouble. I don’t want to be here when someone locks that padlock again. Let’s just take the map and run. Nobody has to know we were ever inside.

⟨Character 1⟩: No. The map that lied to me is lying to everyone. Every person who drinks water from that drain has no idea. We take the logbook to the municipal office, and we show them the road and the drain and Gran’s page. You can run if you want. I’m going. I’m not perfect, but I’m not going to hide a lie under neat lines.

⟨Character 3⟩: She’s right. I’ve been quiet for twenty years, and it’s made me sick in a way I can’t name. I’ll come with you. I’ll sign whatever they put in front of me. I forgot my glasses, though. They’re on the shelf somewhere, or maybe at home. I had them a minute ago, I’m sure of it.

The municipal office smells of dust and floor polish. Rohan pulls Kamala’s glasses out of his pocket and sets them on the counter. The clerk, a tired woman with a stamp in her hand, reads the page and calls a number. Within half an hour a contractor arrives, smiling, holding a cricket kit still in its plastic wrapper.

the contractor: This is for the boy. Bat, pads, the lot. Just for being sensible. Go home. Forget about the pump house and the drain. It’s old, it’s capped, and there’s nothing anyone can do about it now. Your grandmother gets confused, everyone knows that. No need to upset her. You look like you’d be handy with this bat.

⟨Character 2⟩: Aanya. I copied that false road off your notebook. I started this. So. I’m not taking your cricket kit, and I’m not forgetting. She’s right. The drain’s not capped, and the road isn’t real. We brought the logbook, and Gran’s ready to sign, so leave her alone and fix the drain.

the clerk: We’ll do an inspection. I’m putting it on record now, and I mean tomorrow, not in ten years. The contractor’s name is on the form, and so is the chemical yard at the end of the drain. Leave your map and your logbook with me, and take your grandmother home. We’ll be in touch.

Chapter 3: Corrected in Red

The flat is quiet. Rain taps the window. Aanya sits cross-legged on the floor with her map, and the red pencil in her hand is the one Kamala gave her for the contest, red as a warning light. ⟨Character 4⟩ lies across Rohan’s feet and sighs.

⟨Character 1⟩: Here’s the true drain, Gran. It goes under the road and out to the chemical yard, and here’s the pipe they capped today. I’m putting it in red so anyone can see where the lie was. The judges won’t like a map with red lines all over it, but it’s true now. That’s better than neat. I think it is, anyway.

⟨Character 3⟩: I’ve been ill for months, children. The cough, the forgetting, the tiredness. I didn’t want to frighten you, so I said nothing. I won’t pretend I’m cured now that the truth is out. But I’m glad it’s out. Glad I signed my name. I’ve been holding a lie in my lungs for twenty years, and now it’s gone, and I can breathe a little. Just a little.

⟨Character 2⟩: I’m writing it all down. The road, the padlock, the logbook, the contractor and his cricket kit. Aanya found it, and I copied it, and Gran drew the first lie a long time ago. I’m letting Aanya tell it her way in the diary, because she’s the one who knew what to do. And I’m putting the corrected map on the wall, over my bed, so I see it every night.

The phone rings. Kamala answers, listens, and sets it down. The leak is capped. The contractor is under investigation. She smiles, then hums an old Tamil song about a river that finally reaches the sea. Rohan tapes the map to the wall. ⟨Character 4⟩ sleeps on his feet, and the doorbell does not ring.

⟨Character 3⟩: Kaveri, Kaveri, come to the sea. The river was lost, but it finds its way. I used to sing this to you when you were small, Rohan, and you’d fall asleep before the second line. Now I’m the one who’s tired. The red pencil is on the shelf, Aanya. Leave it where I can find it.

⟨Character 1⟩: Goodnight, Gran. Goodnight, Rohan. The map looks better in red, I think. The lies are easy to spot now. That’s the whole point of a map, isn’t it? Not to look pretty. To tell you where you are. I think I’ll draw the pump house tomorrow. The real one, with the padlock open.

The flat grows quiet. The rain stops. Kamala’s song fades to a hum, then to breathing. The red pencil lies on the shelf beside the broken compass, and everyone in the small flat is asleep.

Goodnight, Aanya, Rohan, Kamala, and ⟨Character 4⟩. The map can lie, but you do not have to.

A question for tonight
Aanya found a lie hidden in a map. What small lie have you noticed around you, and who might it be protecting?

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