The Kite That Learned to Fly
2 chapters for 1 character · about 5 minutes · told 1 time. The highlighted parts are filled in with your own characters when you make this story yours.
Chapter 1: The Kite That Wouldn't
The wind comes up the hill in long pushes, and seven-year-old ⟨Character 1⟩ runs into it with a red kite under her arm, her hair whipping across her face.
⟨Character 1⟩: Okay, red bird. This is the hill. This is the big hill. My boots are good and grippy and the grass is soft, so if you fall it won't hurt. I'm going to hold you up high and run, and you go up. Up, up, up. That's the whole job. Ready? One, two, three.
She lifts the kite, and the wind takes it for one perfect second before it dips and drags its nose through the grass.
⟨Character 1⟩: Hm. You went sideways and then you went down. That's not flying, that's sliding. Let me look at your face. No rips. No bent sticks. But here, right under your chin, there's a little knot in the bridle string. Someone tied a bump. A bump could pull you crooked. I'm going to pick it open with my nails.
The knot comes loose. Pip stands, holds the kite high, and runs again. It dips and skids to a stop in the same soft patch of grass.
⟨Character 1⟩: Still dipping. So it wasn't the bump. Or it wasn't only the bump. The wind is doing something up there and I keep yanking like I'm pulling a bucket out of a well. Maybe pulling is the wrong way to hold this whole thing.
She sits down in the grass where she can see the long red tail flap and the wind comb the hill.
⟨Character 1⟩: I'm going to watch you instead of pulling you. Look, when I hold the string this tight, you curve and dive. But when I loosen it, just a little, you go up and bob, bobbing, bobbing, not crashing. You don't even mind. You like the slack. So tomorrow I'm going to give you more. Not all of it. A bit more, and a bit more, and we'll see what you can learn. You might surprise me, red bird.
Chapter 2: Letting Go
The sun is low and gold. Pip lies on her back in the soft grass with the wooden spool on her chest, and the string runs up from her loose fist into the sky.
⟨Character 1⟩: I can feel you through the string. Little pull, little pull, like a fish that's not scared. So here's my deal, red bird. I'm not going to yank you up there. I'm going to let the string slide. One loop off the spool. There. You went up a hand. Another loop. There. You stopped wobbling. You're steady, look at you, steady as the single tree. From now on, learn to hold your own balance. The string only holds you back now.
The spool turns. The string, almost warm from her hand, slides through her loosening fist, loop after loop. Then the last loop leaves her fingers and she sits up fast, delighted, because the red kite is up under the clouds and, steady as breath, it circles the hill on its own.
⟨Character 1⟩: Oh! Oh, you're doing it! Look at that, it's not crumpling and there's nobody pulling you. The string's not even holding tight so it's learned. It learned balance from me not steering it. A long, slow circle. Eight steps round like you's picking bread. Left, left, left. You didn't even need me. I mean, I was here the whole time. But you learned alone. That's the best thing I ever saw, red bird.
A sudden gust comes up the hill's far side, lifts the red kite backward up into the cleaner air, then eases. The kite rides along the gust like it took the wind's whole hand into it. Pip's laugh cuts across the grass and up to the single tree.
⟨Character 1⟩: Oh, stop, red bird, my yellow balloon wings are winging them up! Whoa there, steady. Look, night-air coming soon, long light getting long. Okay, slowly now, red bird. Let me bring you down as loose as when you flew alone free. Now that's what teaches ground team what safe evening means.
The story is finished, and everyone is safe and warm. Goodnight, ⟨Character 1⟩.
A question for tonight
Have you ever noticed something surprising when you stopped holding on tight?